題目:

Some people think the most important thing about being rich is that it gives an opportunity to help other people.  To what extent do you agree or disagree?

題目:

Some people say that the best thing about being rich is being able to help other people.  To what extent do you agree or disagree?

任務:

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

 

【解析】:作文題目其實沒有標準答案,也沒有錯誤的答案或正確的答案。題目問:有人以為富人的一件要事就是有機會幫助別人。你“同意或不同意”的程度到哪里?

 

回答—

 

作者認為一種可行的答案是“同意”說A。有錢人最好助人為樂,基于傳統智慧與科學研究,B。但是富人可以選擇自己熱衷的原由來幫助別人,其快樂程度更大。

 

以下一篇范文只是個人的答案,絕對不是官方的標準答案。范文之后專欄討論作文心圖,邏輯結構(影子模版)。

 

如果考生想搞笑,也可以回答說:有錢人最重要的是自己懂得享受人生,天天吃喝玩樂,憑什么需要幫助別人呢?這種“不同意”的觀點很有趣味,也沒有跑題,但是這個自私自利的立場,似乎不容易自圓其說。

 

題目里并沒有提到“快樂”與“富人.的必然性。這是作者個人個人答題的立場,做為主題:為富之道也,助人為樂。

 

分成四段:主題貫穿全文。

 

第一段引言開頭  你說你想說什么立場(主題),按指標A/B分兩方面A來說。申論真題,一分為二。

 

(如果富人覺得快樂,那么拿錢助人不是覺得超快樂嗎?響亮的回答:是的。A,富人能做最好的事就是幫助別人,何樂而不為,B,特別當富人選擇自己熱衷的原由來幫助別人的時候,其樂更大。)

 

新2代理网站第二段中體A段 你先說一方面指標A,連貫主題。

 

(富人越是幫助別人,則越感到快樂,這看法來自古老智慧和新的研究。)

 

新2代理网站第三段中體B段 你再說一方面指標B,連貫主題。

 

新2代理网站(富人感到格外快樂,如果他們選擇自己所特別熱衷的原由來幫助別人。)

 

第四段結論尾段 你說你說過了什么A/B。二合為一,重申主題。

 

新2代理网站(A。錢財能助人,何樂而不為,B。特別當富人選擇自己熱衷的原由來幫助別人,則其樂更大。是的,富人能做最好的事就是能幫助別人。哪里有富人能助人反而變不快樂或因此變窮呢?

 

【范文】:

 

新2代理网站If being rich is being happy, can helping others be a super-happiness? The resounding answer is yes.  The best thing about being wealthy is that it provides an opportunity to feel happy for being able to help others, particularly when the rich are giving for those causes which they are particularly passionate about.

 

新2代理网站Generally, those who are happiest are those who give the most to others, according to ancient wisdom and new research.  It makes conventional sense that helping other people in need is a path to everlasting happiness.  There is a Chinese saying that goes: “If you want happiness for an hour, take a nap.  If you want happiness for a day, go fishing.  If you want happiness for a year, inherit a fortune.  If you want happiness for a lifetime, help somebody.” Scientifically speaking, giving can activate the same parts of the brain that are stimulated by food and sex.  Experiments show that altruism, or selfless concern for the well-being of others, is hard-wired in the brain, and it is pleasurable.  In view of all this information, helping others may be just the secret to living a life that is both happy and meaningful.

 

However, it is important to remember that helping others for different causes does not always make the rich feel the same level of happiness.  Sometimes the opposite could be true if rich people are being cajoled into giving, such as when friends ask them to donate to their fundraisers.  In this case, giving can make the rich feel taken advantage of, even it is the right thing to do.  Therefore, to be really happy in helping others, the rich can choose the causes they love. Passionate love being the foundation for their giving, it is only natural that rich people care about this cause and not that cause.  Indeed, giving to a cause that specifies what they are going to do with their money can lead to a positive feeling of everlasting happiness rather than a negative feeling of resentment. Understandably, it is not only how much money they give, but also how much love they put into giving.

 

新2代理网站When it comes to giving, rich people can choose the causes that fit them to achieve happiness to a higher extent.  True enough, nothing is happier than to be rich and to have an opportunity to help other people. Does anybody rich feel unhappy and become poor for giving?  

 

 

【引言與結論】:結論是引言的倒影。結論后應,引言前呼。引言中有結論;結論中有引言。引言和結論:結論句子組合相似引言,結論句子排列顛倒引言。一篇自圓其說的文章,引言中話從哪里說起,同樣的話也必須在結論中結束。前呼后應。作文心圖,影子模版,邏輯結構。

 

引言—同結論,是中體的縮影。一分為二,A/B。

 

1. If being rich is being happy, can helping others be a super-happiness?

2. The resounding answer is yes.

3. The best thing about being wealthy is that it provides an opportunity to feel happy for being able to help others, particularly when the rich are giving for those causes which they are passionate about.

 

新2代理网站結論—同引言,是中體的縮影。A/B,二合為一。

3. When it comes to giving, rich people can choose that causes that fit them to achieve happiness to a higher extent.

2. True enough, nothing is happier than to be rich and to have an opportunity to help other people.

1. Does anybody rich feel unhappy and become poor for giving?

 

【中體A段與B段】:引言是中體兩段的縮影。每一段的第一句是指標句A/B(topic sentence)。話分兩頭,A與B,支持引言中的答題立場(主題)。

 

A. 中體A指標句,來自引言的答題立場。這一段,接著指標句之后的幾個句子都是支持解釋指標句。

Generally, those who are happiest are those who give the most to others, according to ancient wisdom and new research.

 

新2代理网站B. 中體B指標句,來自引言的答題立場。這一段,接著指標句之后的幾個句子都是支持解釋指標句。

新2代理网站However, it is important to remember that helping others for different causes does not always make the rich feel the same level of happiness.


投稿:Charlie Hsieh